100 WC nov. 16 Vince

Once upon a time, a man was making an invention but he didn’t know how to make the crafty part. So he went to the castle but got stuck in a storm of leaves. He put his tent up so he could rest but he was scared.  So he went outside of the tent to check what was going on. Suddenly something moved out of the wood covered in white leaves. The man packed his things and left in the morning. Back at his house, he decided the color of his invention was white. The invention was a big success.

 

One thought on “100 WC nov. 16 Vince”

  1. Well done Vince. I enjoyed the story. It was very creative. I loved the image of the moving object covered in white leaves. Keep up the writing. Try use a few more adjectives to enhance the story

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