The leaves were rolling in the wind heavily.
Inside the people were making crafts with their crafty hands.
People were making axes and they were pretty dang crafty to use.
A week has passed and the paint on the white castle was coming off.
So they decided to repaint it. Then some rolling leaves flew into the castle.
Then came a rolling barrel going right for the castle then it turns outÂ
To be a gift from some fellow people. and we were thankful for
The gift. So then people went back to work and they had a great
time.
Great story!
Thank you, this was hard for me.
Riley, you’ve done well to include all the prompt clue words in your writing. I thought they were quite difficult this week. I found it a little hard to read your work though with so many separate sentences and therefore capital letters in the wrong places. Try to read aloud before you publish a piece won’t you.
Thanks for sharing,
Jackie (Team 100WC)
New Zealand
I did my best and this is much better than I have done all year. English is hard for me. I will do better next time.