100 WC nov.16 Riley

The leaves were rolling in the wind heavily.

Inside the people were making crafts with their crafty hands.

People were making axes and they were pretty dang crafty to use.

A week has passed and the paint on the white castle was coming off.

So they decided to repaint it. Then some rolling leaves flew into the castle.

Then came a rolling barrel going right for the castle then it turns out 

To be a gift from some fellow people. and we were thankful for

The gift. So then people went back to work and they had a great


4 thoughts on “100 WC nov.16 Riley”

  1. Riley, you’ve done well to include all the prompt clue words in your writing. I thought they were quite difficult this week. I found it a little hard to read your work though with so many separate sentences and therefore capital letters in the wrong places. Try to read aloud before you publish a piece won’t you.
    Thanks for sharing,
    Jackie (Team 100WC)
    New Zealand

    1. I did my best and this is much better than I have done all year. English is hard for me. I will do better next time.

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